[LA-Policies] [linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies] 3490c2: privacy_policy.md: make non-exclusivity of "may" e...

jwoithe noreply at github.com
Tue Apr 28 00:02:29 AEST 2020


  Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies
  Commit: 3490c2bd336501496601e90e245bb389875fa2dc
      https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/commit/3490c2bd336501496601e90e245bb389875fa2dc
  Author: Jonathan Woithe <jwoithe at just42.net>
  Date:   2020-04-27 (Mon, 27 Apr 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M privacy_policy.md

  Log Message:
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  privacy_policy.md: make non-exclusivity of "may" explicit.

Suggestion from lloy0076 (https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/commit/85155613b420051a2ad73d3dc25cea732085e9e7#r38770890).


  Commit: 77e99c4bcb848e5c4c96b88854ffa0b2c0dbb399
      https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/commit/77e99c4bcb848e5c4c96b88854ffa0b2c0dbb399
  Author: Jonathan Woithe <jwoithe at just42.net>
  Date:   2020-04-27 (Mon, 27 Apr 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M privacy_policy.md

  Log Message:
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  privacy_policy.md: fix description of LA website cookies.

The original description was demonstrably incorrect and appears to be the
result of a drafting error.  Thanks to lloy0076 for picking this up
(https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/commit/85155613b420051a2ad73d3dc25cea732085e9e7#r38770934).


  Commit: 386ef81c8b373d5840c5df415f39a91222e58d12
      https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/commit/386ef81c8b373d5840c5df415f39a91222e58d12
  Author: Jonathan Woithe <jwoithe at just42.net>
  Date:   2020-04-27 (Mon, 27 Apr 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M privacy_policy.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  privacy_policy.md: fix grammatical error.

Thanks to lloy0076 (https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/commit/85155613b420051a2ad73d3dc25cea732085e9e7#r38770962).


  Commit: d2df2215c21948ee30c2bce283380d8111c531be
      https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/commit/d2df2215c21948ee30c2bce283380d8111c531be
  Author: Jonathan Woithe <jwoithe at just42.net>
  Date:   2020-04-27 (Mon, 27 Apr 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M privacy_policy.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  privacy_policy.md: simplify and generalise shipping disclosure.

As pointed out by lloy0076[1], "courier company" was not as generic as it could
have been.

[1] https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/commit/85155613b420051a2ad73d3dc25cea732085e9e7#r38771019


Compare: https://github.com/linuxaustralia/constitution_and_policies/compare/d8a0ea63d812...d2df2215c219


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